DearMissLi,
IamveryhappytohaveyouasourEnglishteacher.
Astheworldisbecomingglobalvillage,Englishisgettingmoreandmoreimportant,somasterEnglishmeanswecanseetheworldthroughanewwindow.
MyEnglishisjustOKandthetwomainlyproblemsinmystudyisthatIfeelitdifficulttolearnwordsbyheart,andthatIoftenfeelnervouswhenspeakEnglish.Ireallyhopethatyoucangivemeagoodadviceonwhattomemorizenewwords.Anothersuggestionistogivethemmorechancestopracticespeaking.IbelievedwecanmakemuchprogressinEnglishunderyourhelp.
Thankyou!
LiHua
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DearMsLi,
IamveryhappytohaveyouasourEnglishteacher.
Astheworldisbecoming【添加a】globalvillage,Englishisgettingmoreandmoreimportant,so【mastering】Englishmeanswecanseetheworldthroughanewwindow.
MyEnglishisjustOKandthetwo【main】problemsinmystudy【are】thatIfeelitdifficulttolearnwordsbyheart,andthatIoftenfeelnervouswhen【speaking】English.Ireallyhopethatyoucangiveme【删去a】goodadviceon【how】tomemorizenewwords.Anothersuggestionistogive【us】morechancestopracticespeaking.I【believe】wecanmakemuchprogressinEnglish【with】yourhelp.Thankyou!
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